30 March, 2006

夕阳

我将夕阳引进了你的房,
温和的光线柔软了房里的每件物,
沉闷的黑衣也变了颜色,格外醒目,
经夕阳抚摸过的被单变得更柔软,
墙上反映的都是橙色的影子,
影子,它不停的跳着
大眼睛看着起舞的它,
开心的跳着,叫着,追着舞动的光,
你闭上双眼,懒洋洋的赖在床上,
问我,此身在何处?
我笑着望向你,什也不说,
看见你嘴角的微笑,我就知道你一定会喜欢!

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

好幸福喔!~~~~

喜歡這句:"大眼睛看着起舞的它,
开心的跳着,叫着,追着舞动的光,"
很生動, 很活潑!!

shing said...

think must read more books now..
cos.. when writing tat time.. so blank.. those beautifull word just won't come out!:(

呼吸的747 @ 747 is breathing said...

eh, Shing, this was written by u ah?
sat lai sat lai ...
very good ler, keep going ~~

Anonymous said...

你的文笔真好喔

shing said...

好多年没写了!
现,有推动力,定勤加努力!
希望得到各位的批评哦!
那我才会进步!:P